The Hidden Aspects of Writing, by Melissa Foster
I read a great quote on Twitter the other day, "Ninety percent of writing happens before it's funneled into the ten percent we actually see." Thank you, Rachel Patterson. This quote hit home with me, as I’m currently reworking a complete novel—a painful, yet oddly enjoyable, process.
It never fails to surprise me how quickly books are read as compared to how long they take to write. I have two friends who read two novels each week. Two! I have to admit, I’m jealous of those friends. I picture them with an iced tea in one hand, novel (paperback) in the other, sitting in the sun, legs kicked up on a lounge chair—not a care in the world. Oh, I know that isn’t their real life, but that’s how I picture them. Gina and Paula will surely get a kick out of this, as one has several kidlets running around, and the other has a teenager to fill her days—and both have Kindles.
Telling the story a.k.a. the first draft. A books journey, from conception to fruition, is a painstaking process. My first draft includes getting the story from my brain to the computer. It’s too long-winded, overly descriptive, and sometimes even out of sequence. The timing of the first draft depends on the novel I’m writing. COME BACK TO ME flowed very quickly, and the writing was far more succinct the first time around, than any of my other manuscripts, while MEGAN’S WAY came out completely out of sequence. This process can take anywhere from a few weeks to a few months.
Writing the book a.k.a. the second draft. Between writing the first draft and working through the second, I typically put my manuscript down for a week and work on something else. This break is necessary in order for me to see the words I’ve actually written on the pages rather than seeing the story I have in my head. I use the second draft to work through my story’s timing and sequence—making sure the timeline makes sense and the story is realistic. I look for depth of characters and presence of settings. Writing the book takes another few weeks, although it’s typically a much shorter process than telling the story, because the story is already there.
Bulldozing the story a.k.a. serious editing. Happy with the direction of the story, the characters, and the plots and subplots, it’s time to move on to bulldozing. This is really a much bigger job than simple editing. This is the stage where I remove the fluff, making the story more succinct. This is also the most painful part of the process for me because it’s when I cut scenes, characters, and subplots. Sometimes I’ll write a scene that I fall in love with—it makes my heart sing and my confidence glow, but it simply doesn’t add anything to the story, and it must end up in the dreaded “save for later” file. Yes, I keep those favorite scenes—one never knows when they’ll come in handy. I’m still waiting to use Molly and Cole Tanner’s wedding scene in a novel.
When I first began bulldozing, I was blown away. In the writing world, we count words—every manuscript is a certain number of words, and the acceptable number of words depends on the genre. When I began writing my first manuscript, THE KNOWING, later renamed CHASING AMANDA, I was told to write 300 pages, rather than a certain number of words. Being the novice that I was, I wrote 300 single-spaced pages—that’s 600 book pages. Way too long of a story for publication. Literally half of my story ended up on the cutting room floor. Bulldozing was an eye-opener for me, a painful one. Now, I’m much more aware of the “fluff” factor, and I try to avoid it at all costs. Bulldozing the story usually takes a few weeks, and involves going back and forth with my editor many times.
Tweaking the story a.k.a. line editing. I love my editors. They see things in my story that I simply cannot see. They interpret my words in ways I have somehow missed, and sometimes, they even love pieces of what I’ve written. It is, however, a love-hate relationship. Their feedback is invaluable. There is no doubt that what I glean from their expertise is priceless, bringing my manuscript to a level I could not achieve without them—but they’re also the ones who point out my writing weaknesses, and that is not always fun. Sometimes we battle, and usually I lose, but they make me feel like it was my idea in the first place, so really, we both win. Line editing takes a long time. I go over each word and make sure it is conveying exactly what I want it to, and that is not as easy as it may sound. Chalk up another few weeks of work.
Taking a book through writing, polishing, and multiple edits, is a process that takes me anywhere from nine months to two years. Every writer is different, some can write a book in seven weeks, while others take five, six, even ten years to complete their manuscript. When my reading friends rip through a novel every three and a half days, I’m overjoyed, but I’d be lying if I didn’t admit that it also leaves me feeling a bit like someone has walked by the window of my newborn baby, smiled, perhaps even said something sweet, then simply walked away. I would want to ask them to come back, enjoy the baby for a bit longer, relish over her cuteness, and wallow in her beauty for a while. Maybe even carry the thought of her—solely the thought of her, without any other babies being introduced—for a few weeks.
The glory of writing is knowing that you are putting your very best story out for readers to enjoy, regardless of how long it takes, or what’s left behind. Readers will devour good books. We have to write more, sometimes faster, to keep up with the demand, and despite the time involved, I love being part of that viscous cycle.
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Thank you Melissa for that great article! It will definitely make me think a little bit more when I finish a book (especially one I really like - like Megan's Way!) about the time and effort that goes in to writing it!
Title: Megan's Way
Author: Melissa Foster
Publisher: Outskirts Press
About the Book: When Megan Taylor, a single mother and artist, receives the shocking news that her cancer has returned, she'll be faced with the most difficult decision she's ever had to make. She'll endure an emotional journey, questioning her own moral and ethical values, and the decisions she'd made long ago. The love she has for her daughter, Olivia, and her closest friends, will be stretched and frayed.
Meanwhile, fourteen-year-old Olivia's world is falling apart right before her eyes, and there's nothing she can do about it. She finds herself acting in ways she cannot even begin to understand. When her internal struggles turn to dangerous behavior, her life will hang in the balance.
Megan's closest friends are caught in a tangled web of deceit. Each must figure out how, and if, they can expose their secrets, or forever be haunted by their pasts.
My thoughts: If you like emotional books, then this is one you must read. I cried through a major portion of it. I could relate to Olivia, as I lost my father to cancer when I was 17. There is so much that you don't understand when you are a teenager, and so much that adults think they must shelter you from. I saw Megan, as well as Holly, wanting to shelter Olivia in any way they could, from the pain that they knew she would be going through.
Megan and Olivia had such a close relationship and Megan struggled with the best way to leave her daughter behind. One that would cause her the least pain. She also needed to decide how much of her past secrets Olivia would be able to handle.
The story unfolds with each character telling portions of it, so you get a well-rounded look at what is going on. There is even a mystical aspect as Megan continues to be part of the story, even after she has passed. It seems that everybody had been holding on to secrets, all to protect someone in their close knit circle of friends. How or will these secrets be revealed is played out in the end of the book.
I really enjoyed reading this book and felt like I was one of Megan's circle of friends. It was hard for me to put down once I started reading it, and as mentioned earlier, I cried through a great portion of it. I found myself trying to read it when my family wasn't around so that I wouldn't have to hide my tears! (lol) This book is being made in to a movie so you must read it before it comes out!
~I received a complimentary ebook from the author in exchange for my honest review.~
Publisher/Publication Date: Outskirts Press, July 2009